Hope the update is doing well and you're over the writers block. If you're looking for an IF with a fantastic story to take inspiration from I would recommend Fallen Hero 1 and 2. Keep up the great work.
Hope the next chapters release sooner than later :)
I read this, and itvleftvme wanting more. I can't wait for whenever you can update this. The concept, and the story seems interesting, so kepp up the good work.
I'm not fan of post-apocalyptic games, but I liked it, the story got me hooked. I'm happy with with the one-person pov. It's refreshing. I hope in the following chapters we will learn a little more about the world, androids and how the world became like this.Baxter such sweetheart 🥺 If this Lightwood hurts him, I want to kill them! 😤😡
Two little things, but more technical - In light mode choice options; text on dark background is difficult to read. I recommend changing the font or using bold.
Grey eyes, please? 🙏 Why the authors don't like grey eyes so much?? You are the third one 😂😂😂
Thank you! I'm very happy you like the demo and Baxter, and don't worry, you'll get to face off with Lightwood soon! I'll see what I can do about the font/colour but I can definitely add grey eyes! 💛
Really enjoyed the story, the characters and the world! I like the writing style, and the way the scenes are set. I agree that the pacing is more fast (maybe more dynamic is a better word), but I didn't get a feeling of "what, when, where" So in my opinion the author did a great job of moving forward, without cutting corners, or jumping through scenes, it felt easy & organic to follow the story. Soooo love the concept, the charecters and the first romance paths and really cannot wait for more! 🤖 🖤
Good concept, feels like things move a bit fast but that's fine considering its just a demo, found a couple glitches if you go with Rae tho, after having chosen the have an interest in her option and then choosing to either hug or do nothing after using your mod to try and escape, the game glitches and resets your interest to nothing. I'll bookmark this, keep working on it :)
I'll get that fixed asap. I'll also see what I can do about the pacing with the next chapters, I took a massive break in between writing the first chapter so that probably explains the pacing issue. Thank you!
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i’m back in your comments again bc i still love this game !!! good luck with the progress, everything looks good and intriguing so far.
on another note: don’t let the ppl rushing u stress u out. let yourself relax
Still no update? Cmon now, it was getting interesting.
Bestie pls I'm working on it I swear 😭😭
NO WAY IT ENDED LIKE TBAT PLS HAVE MERXY THIS IS SO GOOD
IM SORRY BESTIE BUT ITS GONNA GET SO MUCH WORSE😩😩
you're a goob
that's high praise btw
Thank you? Lol
Still no update? I really want to read more
I'm nearing the half way mark of chapter 2 and progress has been pretty good so I'm hoping I can hustle and get to the end soon!
No update yet? really liked it but it was too short
Thanks! Ive been struggling with a bit of writers block for chapter 2 so ive been mainly focusing changing the pov of ch 1 from first to second
Hope the update is doing well and you're over the writers block. If you're looking for an IF with a fantastic story to take inspiration from I would recommend Fallen Hero 1 and 2. Keep up the great work.
Hope the next chapters release sooner than later :)
This is really nice and interesting!
Can't wait for more ✨
thank you so much!
I read this, and itvleftvme wanting more. I can't wait for whenever you can update this. The concept, and the story seems interesting, so kepp up the good work.
I enjoyed the story I will be keep on going
thank you!
I'm not fan of post-apocalyptic games, but I liked it, the story got me hooked. I'm happy with with the one-person pov. It's refreshing. I hope in the following chapters we will learn a little more about the world, androids and how the world became like this. Baxter such sweetheart 🥺 If this Lightwood hurts him, I want to kill them! 😤😡
Two little things, but more technical - In light mode choice options; text on dark background is difficult to read. I recommend changing the font or using bold.
Grey eyes, please? 🙏 Why the authors don't like grey eyes so much?? You are the third one 😂😂😂
Thank you! I'm very happy you like the demo and Baxter, and don't worry, you'll get to face off with Lightwood soon! I'll see what I can do about the font/colour but I can definitely add grey eyes! 💛
Really enjoyed the story, the characters and the world! I like the writing style, and the way the scenes are set. I agree that the pacing is more fast (maybe more dynamic is a better word), but I didn't get a feeling of "what, when, where" So in my opinion the author did a great job of moving forward, without cutting corners, or jumping through scenes, it felt easy & organic to follow the story. Soooo love the concept, the charecters and the first romance paths and really cannot wait for more! 🤖 🖤
Thank you!💛
Good concept, feels like things move a bit fast but that's fine considering its just a demo, found a couple glitches if you go with Rae tho, after having chosen the have an interest in her option and then choosing to either hug or do nothing after using your mod to try and escape, the game glitches and resets your interest to nothing. I'll bookmark this, keep working on it :)
I'll get that fixed asap. I'll also see what I can do about the pacing with the next chapters, I took a massive break in between writing the first chapter so that probably explains the pacing issue. Thank you!